A No-Nonsense Guide to Increasing Your Profits in Mail Order



ENSURE YOUR OFFERS ARE AIMED AT SUITABLE PROSPECTS

Just as it would be ridiculous to attempt selling the
proverbial 'Snow to the Eskimos', it would be similarly
disastrous to offer even the most unusual or unique of
items to people who simply don't want them, or don't
need them.

It could then be just as ridiculous to offer moneymaking
manuals to company directors with already massive
salaries, and jobs they have no intention of changing,
or jeopardising with an extra workload.

So it follows, if you decide to purchase or rent lists
from the appropriate sources, you should ensure that the
names included are actually looking for the offers you
intend to make.  The longer-established list brokers
will of course ensure that the lists they provide do
match your requirements; they are after all in the
business of attracting your regular custom.

Ensure too that the lists you purchase are up-to-date,
and don't consist of names picked at random from any
available telephone directory, even one of dubious
vintage.  Again until you gain in experience, stick with
the larger brokers, even if their prices are
proportionately higher (This isn't necessarily the case,
by the way).

You must maintain adequate records of customers who have
purchased from you in the past - if your service and
goods are satisfactory, these are the people who will
buy from you with confidence in the future.  This
personal list is the one from which you can expect a
higher response to your mailings - guard the contents
with your life.


KEEP ACCURATE UP-TO-DATE RECORDS OF ALL CUSTOMERS

As we've already discussed, you must keep adequate
records of buying customers, to whom you might make
suitable offers in the future.  A simple indexed card
reference system will be adequate in the early days,
with perhaps the intention to computerise (not as
difficult as it sounds) your customer records as your
business expands.

There is however, another reason for maintaining
adequate records, namely to discover whether an
identical list has already been rented, not to
satisfactory effect, in the past.  Conversely, where you
are allowed to use the list on a once-off basis before
another rental fee must be paid, you must have some
means of locating a list which proved particularly
beneficial.

Again, though possibly not a viable proposition for the
smaller businessman working with manual systems, it
would be useful to have access to names that appear on
several lists; names that never buy and which quite
frankly you could well do with out, even if only to save
on postage.  Such an option, best perhaps available from
computerised records, would weed out the poor prospects
from an otherwise satisfactory list, thereby increasing
your percentage response for future mailings.

I sadly, have learned the hard way, the value of keeping
accurate records.  I have comparatively few mail order
contacts, and having offered manuals and reproduction
rights to various firms and individuals, I have remained
quietly confident that I know it is 'Superior
Productions' which expressed an interest in a manual on
so-and-so, just as I swear it was 'Mainstream Books'
that bought the copyright in my very first manual.  It
was, wasn't it?  It was all a very long time ago of
course, but then the memory never fades, does it?  And
because I was so certain of these things, I made no real
record; just committed everything to memory - and now?
Ah well....  Perhaps they'll contact me again one day to
renew our business partnership!


KEEP ACCURATE RECORDS OF ALL CONTACTS

On occasion you might find someone writing to you, not
to obtain an item you currently have on offer, but to
express interest in an item you might one day have for
sale.  Even if at the time it seems unlikely you will be
able to fulfil that person's requirements, always record
the details - BE PREPARED.  And even if the name is
never to be of use to you as a dealer, you might be able
to include that person's details on any mailing lists
you choose to sell to other mail order specialists.


GET TO 'KNOW' YOUR BUYING CUSTOMERS

It is essential for expansion and increased orders that
you get to know your better customers.  You may never
come to meet them personally, but an asterisk marked on
their record card or computer file, will serve to
identify them as past purchasers of an item similar, or
else related, to the offer you now intend to release
onto the market.

You are therefore attempting to predict the requirements
of your customers, selecting the items you think will
interest them, instead of items you want to see them
purchase.  By predicting their present and future needs
you will again achieve a marked improvement in the
response rate to your mailings.


MAKE YOUR OWN MAILING LIST

(Again, Guard it with your life).  You will, perhaps on
many occasions, be offered lists of 'buying' customers
from fellow mail order dealers, or else from firms
specialising in the provision of such lists.  If from a
reputable source the prospect of sending mailshots to
individuals named can indeed prove a most viable
prospect.  Some lists though, are old, as you will no
doubt find from the number of 'gone away' customers that
are unearthed.



Nothing will substitute for a list of customers compiled
by yourself from contacts made as a result of
advertisements you have placed in the normal course of
promoting your business.  You can be certain of the
freshness of your list, just as much as you can be
certain that the needs of the customers concerned
closely match the offers you are making.


MAKE BUYING AS ATTRACTIVE A PROPOSITION AS POSSIBLE

Even if you are attempting to sell to long-established
customers, you should of course do all you can to
stimulate a sale.  Often this is easily accomplished by
means of special offers, discounts, gifts and so on.

If seeking to tempt an entirely new customer, making the
offer as attractive as possible assumes even greater
importance.  Offer as much in the way of discounts and
special offers as you are able, without suffering
financial detriment.  Many mail order dealers sell the
first-time customer an item at very little over its cost
price simply to make that all-important first sale -
could be worth a try!


OFFER INCREASED INCENTIVES TO INCREASE THE SIZE OF
ORDERS

As in the last section, you must always make buying as
attractive a proposition as possible.  BUT hundreds of
tiny, low-profit orders are unlikely to make it worth
your while financially, so try also to encourage
customers to increase the size of their offers by the
use of inducements of a similar nature. Your record of
transactions should incidentally be geared so as to
inform you of which special offers actually resulted in
greater sales, or prompted a first-time sale.


OFFER SPECIAL DISCOUNTS TO LAPSED CUSTOMERS

A self-explanatory section, here we seek to bring back
lapsed customers into our active buyers list.  Offer
inducements similar to those discussed in the last few
sections.  There is one great advantage here not to be
overlooked; if you have done your homework well in the
past, you will 'know' your lapsed customers and their
individual preferences.  Take advantage of this
knowledge and make them an offer they can't refuse!


OFFER INCENTIVES TO ENCOURAGE EARLY ORDERING

To facilitate fast turnover of stock, offer a special
discount or gift, perhaps offer a 'three for the price
of two' package, to all customers who send in their
order by a specified date.  How long the period
concerned should be is up to you to decide; most
dealers I have seen operating on this basis seem to
favour a period of 10-14 days.


INCLUDE SEVERAL OFFERS IN ONE ENVELOPE

By far the biggest advantage of having readers of your
advertisement send for further details, is the
opportunity to include in your reply, details of other
offers similar to that in which the interest has been
expressed.

Don't over-stuff the envelope for fear of creating a
tatty impression  -  your stationery will consequently
bend and crease in all of the wrong places.  Too many
offers included in one communication will only serve to
confuse your potential customer, even put him or her
off reading at all when confronted by wads of
information.  Try a maximum of six offers in one
envelope, and take advantage also of having your
advertisements printed on both sides of the paper,
thereby saving bulk and postage.


ALWAYS ENCLOSE AN ADDRESSED ENVELOPE FOR THE CUSTOMER'S
REPLY

Basically, we all are extremely lazy at heart.  A
customer who has to search too long for the
accoutrements, in this case a pen, scissors and
envelope, not to mention cheque book and stamp, will all
too often abandon the task altogether, intending of
course to go back to it later.........

The easier we make the task, the greater our chances of
making a sale.  Obviously no-one's suggesting you send a
pen with every mailing, or even the stamp for return
postage, although in the latter respect there is a great
deal to be said for providing FREEPOST envelopes as
some mail order dealers know to their advantage.  But
there is one inexpensive way in which you can make the
task easier for the customer, and that is to provide an
addressed envelope for the return of the order.  Your
assistance is two-fold: one, there is no envelope to
search for; two, the daunting task of transferring the
address from advertisement to envelope is undertaken on
the individual's behalf.  A rubber stamp bearing your
name and address can save hours here.

If you decide to offer 'FREEPOST' so much the better -
you are getting an order out of it after all.  Those who
would disagree on this point argue that if the customer
can afford the cost of the item itself, then he or she
can also afford the cost of postage.  And yes, that
indeed is true, so here let us be content with the
prospect of saving a trip to the post office; preventing
the envelope from being lost en route, perhaps lost
altogether, or else delayed to such an extent that the
customer, when discovering the deadline for a special
offer or inducement has passed, decides to consign the
whole lot to the rubbish bin.


DON'T HIDE THE PRICE

Don't make your potential customers work too hard at
finding out how much you want for the item you are
offering.  Remember the 'first few seconds' rule; the
well-founded proposition that certainly in mail order
you must get at least the bare bones of your message
across to the reader within the first four or five
seconds, and do all you can to grab the reader's
interest in that time - and price remember is something
of universal interest.  Don't of course make it stand
out in massive print as one often finds at the opening
day of a mammoth and extremely trashy bargain sale.
Just make the customer's side of the agreement obvious
to him or her as soon as interest in the item itself has
been aroused.  Small print doesn't work in mail order -
FIRST FEW SECONDS remember!


DON'T TRY TO BE TOO CLEVER

At least in your approach to the customer!  Don't seek
to confuse the customer with big, elusive words that he
or she needs a dictionary to interpret - the dictionary
will stay on the shelf and your letter will go in the
bin!

A sincere, straight-forward approach is what you should
aim for, not something that appears to have emanated
from a huge London advertising agency.  A conversational
approach will appeal to the customer and win him or her
over to your side.

But you shout "aren't my advertisements supposed to be
clever?" And the answer is 'Yes, indeed', but
'cleverness' in this context is best achieved by the
actual words used and the manner of their presentation. 
See the section on the most effective words to include
in advertisements.


MAKE YOUR ADVERTISING BELIEVABLE

There will always be people gullible enough to believe
even the most incredible of statements an advertiser
could create.  Thankfully, such unfortunates comprise a
tiny minority of the public in the market for mail order
products.  The remainder know, often as a result of
past experience, that no-one can promise the world and
come up with it.  Try promising what you can't deliver,
and you might make one or two sales before your
advertising is suspended by the very publications you
desperately need to remain in favour with.
Be realistic in all of your offers; by all means state
loudly the worth and benefits of what you have to offer,
but never make untruthful statements - any customer you
gain will be a once-only contact, who incidentally will
never give you the favourable references so necessary
to expand your business.


ALWAYS USE THE WORD 'YOU'

In mail order, we seek of course to win the potential
customer over to our side, to join us in a unique
partnership, one in which we might never meet face to
face, and one therefore based primarily on confidence
and trust.  Try therefore to achieve a spirit of
friendship, by writing in a manner similar to that you
would adopt in writing to a friend.  Don't seek to
impress the reader with your vocabulary, don't be too
clever, and above all draw him or her into the heart of
your message by using t he word 'YOU' - it's a word
guaranteed to cement that alliance you hope to develop
on a long-standing basis.  'WE', used in the right
context, is similarly effective.  This is a case where
'familiarity' most certainly does not 'breed contempt'!


POSTING YOUR CORRESPONDENCE

Even the day on which you post your mail will have a
significant effect upon whether the reader becomes a
buying customer.  Post too early in the month, and those
on monthly salaries will be unlikely to give your offer
much of a thought if pay-day is still so far away.  Post
on a Monday for Tuesday delivery, and weekly-paid
employees too are financially reluctant to buy what it
is you have to offer.  Of course, in reality you might
not be able to assess whether your reader is weekly or
monthly p aid, although the group to which you direct
your mail may be some indication as to the frequency of
such.  Teachers, receiving details of your new manual on
opportunities available for them, are almost certainly
monthly paid.  Those applying for details of
opportunities in unskilled employment are likely to be
weekly paid.  Where you can't judge the situation with
any degree of accuracy, then assume that monthly paid or
weekly, we all require access to some cash for the
purposes of weekend activities, and mail your post to
arrive just before those events get off the ground!


USE ATTENTION-GRABBING WORDS, PHRASES AND SENTENCES

We discuss later what are the most effective words to
use, but to state the obvious, no word used in isolation
is going to stand a chance of encouraging a sale.  Use
those attention-grabbing words within the context of
neatly, grammatically composed sentences, and use them
evenly spaced throughout your text.  Don't overdo the
use of one word to the exclusion of others that could be
just as effective; constant repetition also becomes
boring, even leads to suspicion that you may be trying
to convince the reader of something you do not entirely
believe yourself.

Choose the words that will go into your message before
you actually set to writing your advertising material. 
Could another word with a similar meaning add more
impact to the message you intend to convey.  If you
choose the word 'NEW' might 'AT LAST' no provide greater
impact, assuming your product is of course unique as
well as new.

Check too that your wording is truthful - don't call
something 'UNIQUE' unless it actually is; loss of
credibility is never going to win you repeat custom.


UNDERLINE IMPORTANT WORDS OR SENTENCES

Again stating the obvious, words underlined will strike
home to the reader; too many though will cause
confusion, look untidy and careless, and lead the reader
to doubt your claims.  Content yourself with underlining
up to a maximum of six occasions. Look at the
advertising material of traders with more years of
experience and see what their underlining policy is -
NEVER BE AFRAID TO LEARN FROM OTHERS.



One great advantage of modern typewriters, particularly
word processors, is the ability to have chosen words
produced in bold print, sometimes totally alleviating
the need for underlining.


KEEP SENTENCES AND PARAGRAPHS SHORT AND PUNCHY

Anyone who writes for a living will testify to the
benefits of short snappy sentences and paragraphs.  In
the literary sense they tend to create a sense of
urgency that positively wills the reader to hasten his
way through the text, unable to put the document aside
until the very last word has been safely devoured.  And
the same applies to your mailing blurb; make them want
to read it by your choice of words; use this 'speed'
tactic to keep them reading until the gist of your offer
has been completely digested.


USE THE ADVERTISING WORLD'S MOST PERSUASIVE WORDS

Studies of advertising trends and techniques, and the
resulting efficiency in terms of orders produced, have
shown that certain words used in advertising text tend
to have a strong 'pulling' effect, that is they make the
potential customer eager to know more, whereupon he or
she will continue reading your words before hastily
reaching for the necessary writing implements.  The
earlier these words are used the better.  If
incorporated into your opening sentence you have
accomplished a two-fold task; one of getting your
message across in those vital first few seconds; and
two, 'hooking' the reader as early as possible.  Though
over periods of time specific words will change their
order in the hierarchy of persuasive advertising words,
the following are generally regarded as amongst the
most effective:

ABSOLUTELY  AMAZING  BARGAIN  BIG  COMPLETE
CONFIDENTIAL DISCOUNT  DISCOVERY  EASY  EXCELLENT
EXCITING  FREE  GENUINE GIFT  GIGANTIC  GREATEST
GUARANTEE  HEALTH  HUGE  INDEPENDENCE INTERESTING
LARGEST  LATEST  LOVE  MAGIC  MILLIONS  MILLIONAIRE
MONEY  NEW  OFFER  OUTSTANDING  POPULAR  POWERFUL
PRACTICAL PROFESSIONAL  PROFITABLE  PROVEN  QUALITY
REDUCED  REMARKABLE RELIABLE  RESULTS  REVEAL
REVOLUTIONARY  SAFETY  SAVE  SECRETS SENSATIONAL
SPECIAL  STURDY  SUCCESSFUL  SUPERIOR  SURPRISE TERRIFIC
TESTED  TREMENDOUS  TYCOON  UNCONDITIONAL  UNIQUE
UNLIMITED  UNUSUAL  USEFUL  VALUABLE  YOU  WEALTH
WONDERFUL

REMEMBER - THE WORD 'FREE' IS THE MOST EFFECTIVE OF ALL
ACTION STIMULATORS.


QUESTIONS ARE SOMETIMES MORE EFFECTIVE THAN STATEMENTS

In seeking to involve the reader in what it is we have
to say, we must attempt to create a relationship with
him or her; one which allows us to question his or her
desires and motives.  By stating the potential
customer's need for financial security and independence,
may be tantamount, at least in the reader's eyes, to an
invasion of privacy, creating an altogether far too
personal an approach than one would expect in a first
communication with someone who is after all, a stranger. 
But, questioning him or her in not too bold a fashion,
we are able to talk to the subconscious, which is of
course fully aware of the subject's needs in life.  So
'You need to get well away from the rat race', becomes
'Like to escape the rate race?'; before the subject has
time to question your motives for such an intrusion, the
subconscious has gone into overdrive - it needs to know
more! Instead of 'How dare you?', the question becomes
'How?' -  an altogether better footing for you to carry
on with that all-important solution to the reader's
overwhelming desire for what we all want in abundance:
success, personal achievement, independence, and above
all, wealth.

The statements approach need not of course always lead
to a feeling of 'forwardness' on the part of the writer. 
It may simply fall flat in its tracks - 'No-one gets
rich working for someone else', might be met with the
answer, 'No, but there's plenty of time to worry about
that when I get settled down for the night'.  The letter
is put to one side and the vital first few seconds in
which you must catch and maintain your reader's
attention might never be resurrected.  So instead try
asking the question 'Want to stop working for someone
else?  Why not write your own pay cheque, get what you
want out of life, start enjoying yourself for a change?'
Ah!  Well - it might be safe to leave the 'G & T' for a
minute or two, while we find out whether this really is
the chance we've been waiting for all of those years
bashing away at the typewriter, for a boss who hardly
notices your existence, except of course when he
disputes your professed entitlement to a wage rise.


MAKE A CLIPPINGS FILE

If you decide, for reasons of economy or because you are
capable of doing so, you can help yourself to create
highly professional circulars and advertising
literature, simply by cutting out and keeping all of
those parts of other dealers' advertising that might be
of use to you in the future.

So for instance, a bold headline giving the title of a
book or manual you also have to offer, can be cut out
and used for your own material.  The pieces you retain
are stuck onto your master piece of artwork which is
then photocopied to reveal any 'cutting' lines which
must of course be obliterated.  Snowpake and other forms
of typists' correcting fluid painted along the marks
will erase them completely.  Whether you carry out the
correction on the master or the photocopy is for you to
decide.  My preference is to make amendments to the
master copy, referring of course to the photocopy for
guidance as to where such amendments are required.  The
reason for my preference is that a master almost always
provides better copies than do repeated photocopies.

Your clippings file can also contain the borders used
around some full page advertisements in the many
specialist mail order publications.  The better the
production of the magazine itself the better will be
standard, quality and clarity of the cuttings
available.  Take everything that might be of interest
unless of course by doing so you will steal a copyright,
or encroach upon someone else's advertising slogan -
copycats win favour with no-one!  But words, borders,
symbols, all are of use, even if only to save you the
effort and expense of making your own up with the
ever-popular, superbly effective 'Letraset' and other
forms of rub-down lettering.

I personally need to produce many printed titles for the
front pages of new manuals; I've lost count of the
number of times I've been able to consult my clippings
file and produce one of those paste-ups reminiscent of
the movie world' 'blackmail letter', and subsequently
'snowpake' it into an extremely attractive cover with
little effort or expense.


HOW TO GET YOUR ADVERTISEMENTS TYPSET 'FREE'

I've placed the inverted commas around the word 'Free',
since there will be some of you who disagree with me
that what I suggest is actually a free service.   Still,
here goes.  In some of the better mail order magazines,
those taking a full-page advertisement are offered the
facility to have their typed or written originals typset
before being published.  The advertisement subsequently
published in the magazine can then be clipped out and
photocopied, obviously with page numbers and magazine de
tails obliterated with your ever ready typists'
correction fluid.

Whether the service is actually 'free' I suppose depends
upon whether you would have taken a full-page
advertisement without the offer of typsetting, but
remember the cost of having your material typset is
going to cost you a fair proportion of what you have
paid for the advertisement - perhaps worth considering
for the advantage of the re-usable professional artwork,
as well as to test the effects of a change to your
normal form of  advertising.


DESCRIBE BENEFITS RATHER THAN FEATURES OF THE PRODUCT

Perhaps with the possible exception of status symbols,
the potential customer is more interested in the
benefits he or she will stand to gain from your product,
rather than the features of the product itself.  In the
field of home publishing, a manual is a manual when all
is said and done; a badly typed or tattily presented
example might not win you a repeat customer, but if the
information imparted is of benefit to the customer he or
she may choose to follow it and forget earlier
intentions to complain about quality of presentation.

In your advertising literature then, you should stress
what benefits your manual will confer upon the reader. 
Will it allow him or her to set up in a chosen business,
find lucrative homeworking opportunities, allow the
reader to confidently sit an important examination?  It
will?  Right, well get that message across as directly
and efficiently as possible, and omit any irrelevant
details which might slow down the pace of the message.


PERSONALISE SALUTIONS WHERE POSSIBLE

A letter addressed to 'Dear Mr Smith' will be read with
far more interest than would the same message to 'Dear
Sir', and much, much more so than one to 'Dear
Sir/Madam'.  Why?  Simply because if we feel someone has
taken the trouble to address us personally, then what
is on offer must be appropriate to our needs.  I suspect
too, that such a personal touch endears the reader to
the writer, as well as adding a touch of professionalism
to the latter's correspondence.

It really is worthwhile trying always to include a
personal letter with your mailing; not so difficult for
the small mail order dealer, but time-consuming for the
larger dealer.  Today's word processors can help the
latter by use of the 'mailshot' facility and the
opportunity to have names entered individually on
letters which are then produced as original copies for
all recipients.


PUT YOUR LETTERHEAD AT THE BOTTOM OF SALES LETTERS

Your message reaches 'home' almost immediately by
placing your address and Company name at the bottom of
the letter, perhaps with a logo of some sort at the top
to prevent overbalancing the traditional form one
expects in correspondence.  The greater part of the
space at the top, normally reserved for name and
address, is allocated for the printing of your most
important sales point.

For example if you are stressing wealth within three
years, you might make the first message the reader sees
'FINANCIAL INDEPENDENCE WITHIN THREE YEARS'.  Of course
the reader will then continue reading the text,
regardless yet of who has sent t he document.  Attract,
and hold the readers' interest in this way and you're
part way to a sale already.


FOLDING YOUR DOCUMENTS

We are told that psychologically the first 4 or 5
seconds after the recipient handles your communication
are of vital importance.  What happens within that short
period will make or break your chances of a sale.  So,
hide your message, make getting into the envelope
difficult, cause any kind of hindrance or unnecessary
delay - and you've lost it!

Normally when we remove the contents from an envelope,
we are confronted by a blank, white folded paper or
batch of papers.  It takes a second or two to open them
flat for the message to be revealed - a second or two
too long!

Almost too obvious a solution for words, but one that
didn't cross my mind until pointed out by a kindly
colleague, is to fold your documents in the opposite
manner, with print outwards.  Pop it into the envelope
so that your headline, or message, will be the first
thing observed upon opening, and those few precious
seconds will barely have started to tick.


MAKE YOUR PRESENTATION DIFFERENT TO OTHERS

So, you're offering something similar to that of your
competitors? Does this mean the early bird is the only
one to get the worm? Most certainly not!  Unless that is
you make no effort to distance yourself from your
competitors, in which case yours will most likely be one
of many identical offers the recipient throws into the
waste-paper bin that day.

So what can you do if you are, after all, offering an
identical product?  You might not be able to change the
product, but you can most definitely market your product
in a manner that sets it apart, and above, those of your
competitors.

How?  Use better quality stationery for a start; perhaps
have your circulars typset where others are using cheap,
faded photocopies year after year, as they wonder quite
innocently why their mailings never show a response rate
as high as 'Peter Perfect', who just happens to include
a personal letter to all of his potential customers,
typed on quality paper and despatched in long, white
envelopes.

'Peter Perfect' incidentally, also individually
hand-signs every letter he mails; not for him that
once-written, many times photocopied autograph appended
to the bottom of his all-important communications.

Make your message different to those of your
competitors.  Study advertising trends and techniques
and give your message the impact and immediacy your
competitors' lack.  If necessary have your sales
leaflets written professionally for you.  You will have
to pay for the services of an advertising copywriter of
course, but if you feel this area is likely to be your
downfall, then paying up can only be money well spent.

Where possible, change what it is you have to offer, by
making a package of items, for instance a batch of three
or so manuals all relating to writing as a career, or
several items concerning different aspects of mail
order.  Your basic product won't be different; your
offer certainly will!  You can improve your chances of
creating an exclusive offer by including something only
available to yourself; in a batch of manuals it's that
one written by yourself, or one in which you have
purchased the exclusive copyright from the author or his
or her agent.

Keeping prices competitive also sets you apart from
fellow traders, as does paying great attention to the
quality of the item you offer.  If you offer manuals you
might decide to have them typeset or printed, anything
to make your words different if not in context, at
least in the manner of their presentation.

If you can, include an exclusive free gift (one only you
can provide), with your main offer, and again you have
accomplished the task of making your mailing different.

A while ago a well-known home publisher rang me at home
to discuss the details of my order, which to my mind had
been more than adequately conveyed.  Why on earth he
rang me I had no idea.  He didn't, as I expected, seek
to persuade me to increase the size of my order; he
just chatted with me as would a long-lost friend.  When
my manuals came, they were typset, beautifully
presented, included all of the documentation I would
ever need (in duplicate), and came with an extremely
friendly, helpful letter to accompany them.  I buy
everything from him now - in retrospect I find that the
reason for his 'phone call was simply that HE CARES -
about his BUSINESS, his PRESENTATION, and most
importantly about his CUSTOMERS.  He will still be going
strong long after the 'fly-by-nights' have discovered
the error of their 'grab-your-money-and-mail-the-goods'
trading methods.


USE DIFFERENT COLOURED PAPER FOR MULTI-SHEET MAILINGS

Where you are including several offers in one envelope
as is so often the case in home publishing, use several
different colours of paper on which to have them
printed.  Don't go for the bright, gaudy colours; all
too often that tends to look cheap and tatty - a
selection of pastel shades perhaps on better quality
than photocopying paper is a different matter entirely. 
You will of course accomplish the task of making your
mail stand out from the rest of the white offerings the
addressee receive s that day - if hastily, perhaps in a
spare moment or two, the potential customer decides to
take you up on what it is you propose then it won't
require a massive hunt to sort out the appropriate
documentation.  Remember as always the need to make the
job as easy as possible for the customer.


ACKNOWLEDGE RECEIPT IF DELAYS OCCUR

To maintain good customer relations, it is essential
that you advise customers of any outstanding orders that
will not be filled within the time originally specified. 
A short personal note will suffice, with a brief
apology, and some indication of the revised date of
delivery.  Don't omit this essential point - once you
have a customer, this represents potential future custom
- custom that will be taken elsewhere if you prove tardy
without adequate explanation.


WITH DESPATCH SEND MORE OFFERS

When goods are sent out take the opportunity to include
offers of other goods available, primarily items of a
similar nature; though if you don't know your customers
exact requirements or preferences, then include a
mixture of non-related items at least with the first
few business transactions.


THE VALUE OF THE P.S. (POSTSCRIPT)

In everyday terms a P.S. implies that we have omitted
something of importance from the main body of our
communication.  In the world of mail order it can serve
a far different purpose, one of reinforcing the message
of the advertising blurb.  You may use this device to
state an extra benefit, repeat a benefit already stated,
or to advise the customer of a special offer, thereby
attempting to clinch a deal that might not be
forthcoming without the appropriate additional
incentive.

ALWAYS INCLUDE A CLIP COUPON

Make life as easy as possible for the intended
purchaser; don't in his mad scramble for stationery, pen
and scissors, allow seeds of doubt to arise in his mind
and risk losing the order.  Just as you are advised to
include an addressed envelope with every order, also
ensure your communications carry a clip coupon, i.e.
space for the customer to complete his or her name and
address for the delivery of the order.  Once safely in
the envelope, it's much less likely that a change of
mind will occur.


MAKE YOUR BROCHURES THE BEST

In the same way as you must make your presentation
different, you should always make the quality and
content of your brochures, or other form of
documentation, as good as you are able in both financial
and practical terms.

If, like me, you've suffered periods when you've been
inundated with chain letters and similarly suspicious
'get rich quick' schemes, it must surely have crossed
your mind, that if the method of making vast sums of
money is as easy as the sender would have us believe,
then why is the document professing such, produced on
the tattiest piece of paper in the most unbelievably bad
photocopying production you could imagine?  How many
more of us would be swayed I wonder, had the message
been conveyed in embossed, or at least woven laid
paper; printed instead of photocopied; typed instead of
hand-scrawled?

Someone whose brochures spell 'quality' confers the
impression of ability to come up with what it is he or
she is shortly to offer.  If selling moneymaking ideas,
yes, he or she has obviously made it if the money this
brochure must have cost is anything to go by! If selling
goods, then we subconsciously consider the goods to be
of value proportionate to the medium by which they come
to our attention.


TELLING THE READER 'NOT TO' USUALLY MAKES HIM WANT TO

In the same way that asking questions of the reader is
often more effective than using bland statements,
telling the reader not to do something generally evokes
a 'who's he think he is telling me what not to do?  I
will if I want',  and he will.  So 'Don't Read This
Unless You Want To Be Seriously Rich', even if read by
someone initially sceptical, will most likely leave that
person with little option but to read it.  Your command
must of course be worded with care if you aren't to
cause hostility on the part of the reader, or indeed to
counteract the remainder of the message that is to
follow.  So 'Put this letter down at your peril', might
not in some instances create as sudden an impact as for
example 'Don't Throw This Letter Away - Your Future
Depends on It'.  Though you might like to, you'd never
of course suggest, 'Don't be such a stupid *'@?* all of
your life....'


OPENING LINE SHOULD ALWAYS OFFER SOMETHING OF BENEFIT

In seeking to gain advantage of that 'first few seconds'
rule, we must draw our reader into our 'power' as early
in our message as possible.  If you can convince the
reader within your opening line that he or she stands to
gain something of benefit by continuing to read your
letter or circular you have accomplished your mission. 
Here we can take advantage of headline openings, short
shocking statements of fact or statistics, asking the
reader a question the answer to which can only be found
by reading on.  You can instead make a plain statement
but one concerning a matter close to the hearts of us
all.

For a publication revealing ways to succeed in business
that opening statement might be:

ARE YOU TIRED OF WORKING FOR SOMEONE ELSE?

MILLIONAIRES MAKE IT BEFORE THEY ARE THIRTY!   RUBBISH!

IF YOU'RE LOOKING FOR ONE GOOD BUSINESS IDEA, LOOK NO
FURTHER, FOR I CAN SHOW YOU 1001....
CHECK THAT YOUR PRODUCT HAS MARKET APPEAL

A product similar to one being offered by others will,
perhaps ironically, stand you in better stead of a mail
order success, than will one for which you are the sole
supplier.  Before you shout 'Rubbish!', let me explain
further.  My statement assumes that you are in a
competitive market, perhaps selling those products
available also from other sources.  In the case of
business manuals, if the rest are selling '100 Ways to
Make it by Yourself' and you offer the same title,
you're in with a chance, albeit with a share of the
market.  If on the other hand you seek to offer 'Fishing
Grounds of the Western World' to similar customers, you
might perhaps consider another calling, so wide will you
be of the mark with respect to selecting items of
interest to established readers of the publication in
which you have placed your advertisement.

Consider however a title in which you have exclusive
dealership, perhaps one you have written yourself, and
which you have named 'Hitting the Big Time - 1000 Great
Business Ideas'.  Here you will see that you are
offering something different to your competitors within
the field of publishing, but something that falls within
the same general area of interest.  You will share the
same readership, with their similar interest in making
money - you will not share the market for your
publication, for it is unique to your business.


GIVE GOOD VALUE FOR MONEY

In mail order we depend to a great extent, if not on
repeat custom, then at least on word-of-mouth
recommendation from satisfied customers.  Always give
good value for money and never refuse to make refunds to
customers who prove not satisfied with y our goods.

In home publishing we might perhaps provide our manuals
with card covers; perhaps have our text typset; perhaps
include an extra report free as a gesture of good faith.

ALWAYS ASK FOR A STAMPED ADDRESSED ENVELOPE OR RETURN
POSTAGE
Some will disagree with me on this point, arguing
perhaps that the extra payment on the part of the
enquirer might sway that person to transfer his enquiry
elsewhere - to someone not requiring such additional
cost.  Some mail order dealers indeed, go so far as to
offer a freepost service to alleviate the need for
payment altogether in respect of enquiries.

It's entirely a matter for personal opinion, but I for
one think it will help to defray your costs to ask for
postage, and will also serve to eliminate the curious
element who send for lists and details of offers they
have no intention of acting upon.  As with most other
things in mail order it may be worthwhile trying out the
alternatives to all of the rules surrounding the game -
always do what works best for you.


NEVER BE AFRAID TO LEARN FROM OTHERS

In business, there is no place for pride, even less for
arrogance.  Remember there will almost  certainly be
others with more experience than yourself, and the mere
fact that they have been around for any length of time
confirms that they have found the formula for business
success that suits them.  Their advertising might not
change from one year to the next, nor might the basic
stock they offer, but if the firm itself continues to
exist it surely isn't purely for the health of the
proprietor. Never be afraid to ask yourself why certain
businessmen follow one policy, whilst others cling
steadfastly to another.  Analyse the marketing strategy
of competitors, dissect their advertisements, attempt to
read their minds, and never be afraid to learn from
them, as others will seek one day to learn from you.


MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT

Advertising is never cheap, and so we must strive to get
the best we can from as few words as possible.  This
applies primarily if we are paying 'by the word' just as
much as it does to the display advertisement of a
stipulated size.  Words will always be at a premium, so
never duplicate any part of your message or labour any
particular point.  Strive to find words that will work
better than those you have originally chosen.

BUT never, never cut out important words and phrases,
that's not what we are after - we seek simply to
eliminate the superfluous elements.


ADVERTISE IN LOW COST MAGAZINES

Usually the higher the advertising costs the higher will
be the expected response rate.  BUT not always.  Some
smaller mail order magazines have lower overheads and
therefore can charge less for advertising.  Some seek to
circulate items and advertisements of interest to
subscribers only, not seeking to make a vast profit and
therefore not requiring huge advertising costs to remain
financially viable.  In magazines for opportunity
seekers and mail order home publishers, the cost of a
full-page advertisement can be as little as Å“10 yet
still reach 3000 or more actively interested readers. 
Don't dismiss these small publications particularly when
the mutual interest of the readers matches exactly what
it is you propose to advertise.  Advertising is always
a matter of trial and error - 'Nothing Venture, Nothing
Gain' being the operative statement.  You have to accept
that with inexperience you will make some mistakes,
whether for higher or lower cost advertisements.

You should generally expect to receive two enquiries for
every Å“1 your advertisement has cost; of those enquiries
a sales ratio of 10% - 40% should result.


DO SERIES ADS FOR LOWER COST

No-one ever claimed advertising was cheap.  Those
seeking to sell you advertising space know fine well
that without advertising your business has no foundation
- and they will charge for the privilege of keeping your
business afloat.  But getting you , and keeping you, are
entirely different matters.



Actually obtaining your custom as an advertiser in the
first place is often the hardest part of any publication
or whatever medium's workload.  Once you are hooked they
move on to other people hoping to attract them to the
organisation's clientele.  For this reason most
publications will seek to retain your continued custom
by giving discounts on series of advertisements.  One
insertion will therefore cost proportionately more than
will each of a run of thirteen or so consecutive
insertion s, if only for the reason that staffing costs
will be reduced once that initial first transaction is
completed.

If not obvious that a series advertisement carries a
reduced charge ask for such when you place your
advertisement.  You might or might not get a discount,
but you'll never know unless you ask.


KEEP IMPROVING YOUR ADS AND BROCHURES

Whatever your mail order line, always endeavour to be
the best, even if your product is not unique to
yourself.  Make your brochures the best, make your
advertisements the ones that attract the browsing
readership.  Once you think you have that magic formula,
remain loyal to it, always of course making and testing
small changes to your basic design, just in case some
outside factor is having an unnoticeable effect upon
your response rate.


GET OTHER PEOPLE TO ADVERTISE FOR YOU

If a viable proposition financially, it's always a good
idea to gain extra trade by having others advertise for
you, on a commission basis.  This often happens in the
field of publishing where one publisher 'dropships' for
another who has closed the sale.  If you work on a 50%
commission basis you may feel this level of reduction in
takings a small price to pay for a lower advertising
budget and a reduced workload.  Normally all that is
required is that you forward your circulars to the agent
who then arranges for their distribution by whatever
means.  For each sale he or she makes, the appropriate
commission is deducted before the remainder with the
customers' details are forwarded to you, the supplier,
for despatch of the goods.


USE POWERFUL HEADLINES

Just as a strong headline draws your attention at the
newspaper stands, so does a powerfully headed
advertisement attract potential customer interest.  Your
advert is likely to be vying with many others for the
attention of the readership, and anything you can do to
make those readers stop and take notice of your
advertisement is a step nearer to a sale.  Short, punchy
headlines tend to work better, and more so if they also
incorporate those words listed earlier as the most
potent in the world of advertising.

Analyse the headlines of advertisers with more
experience than yourself.  Those advertisements that
have remained unchanged for some length of time have a
great deal to offer the newcomer - they have stood the
test of time; they have been proved to work.


THE POWER OF POSITIVE THINKING

If you aren't enthusiastic and positive about your
products how can you expect the customer to feel that
way about them? 'Accentuate the positive, eliminate the
negative' I think is how the song puts it.

Guide your potential customer through a positive,
enthusiastic sales message, and your chances of a sale
are greatly increased.


DON'T ALLOW YOURSELF THE LUXURY OF 'WAFFLING'

Always come straight to the point, don't waffle, don't
over-embellish your words, and above all don't venture
from the path of convincing the reader that what he or
she really needs is your product.  Waffling is
guaranteed to cause him or her to have second thoughts
about your product.  Once you have gained your potential
customer's interest at the beginning of your letter or
other means of communication, keep him pointed firmly in
the direction of buying your product.


MAKE THE GREATEST EARNINGS AS A PRIME SOURCE

If of course you sell an item identical or similar to
that of your competitors you share the potential market
with them.  Sell something unique to yourself and you
have the market to yourself.  In home publishing the
prime source has exclusive copyright in a manual or
folio; perhaps one the entrepreneur has written him or
herself, or else one that has been purchased outright
from the writer or the writer's representative.

The prime source might instead make up a package of
manuals and folios including one exclusive to him or
herself.  It might instead consist of manuals in the
possession of several other publishers but in their
present unique form of presentation they are of course
unobtainable elsewhere for the price concerned.


KEEP ON KEEPING ON

Perhaps the most important advice on how to achieve the
Lion's share of the profits is never to let your
business grow stale, never become complacent, never be a
satisfied second best, never stop learning, never stop
looking for new pastures. Strive always to improve your
already impressive standards, make your brochures the
best, make your products the envy of your competitors. 
Your maxim must always be that old favourite:



                       EVERY DAY,

                     IN EVERY WAY,

                  I AM GETTING BETTER.

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